Hey Guys!
I m starting a new story named “destiny”.I had this idea in my mind for a long time now and decided to write it out. Hope you guys enjoy it and please leave your frank comments…
This Idea or concept is entirely different from any other story… Please leave your honest opinions….if u read it pls write comments whether u like it or not….pls do comment ur comments r really imp for me………
I’m not posting a character sketch since you will see the characters develop in the story itself…………
Story-line………
They entered his flat………arman walked inside…..ridhima still waiting at the door…..
Ar:andar avo………
She quitely walked in………there was complete silence…..she looked at him…..
Ri:pls…..muje sirf aaj raat yaha rehne do….mai kaal subha yaha se chali jaungi…..pls(tears fell from her eye)
Ar:(angrily)maai tumhe yaha rehne dunga…..how can u even think of it?? It is not my mistake……they forced me to marry u???meri life barbad ho gayi tumhari wajah se……….it’s like a living hell……..and how can u think I will let u live in my house??????????
She stood their crying…………..she turned around to leavve…..
Ar:kaha ja rahi ho……..meri baat abhi khatam nahi hui hai………to mai kehraha tha ki agar tum he lagta hai mai tumse yeh sab kahunga………aur tumhe ghar se nikal dunga to tum galat ho………
She looked at him in a shock……….he came forward……made her sit on the sofa……
Ar:ridhima how could u think that I will leave u all alone….it’s not ur falt…..maine tumse apni marzi se shadi ki hai…..koi zor zabardasti se nahi…..u r my wife…my responsibility……..and my destiny…..mai hamesha tumhare saath rahunga………I will be always there for u……..
She stayed quiet for a while. she started crying……..
Arman got up to the kitchen….brought water……..she drank it….
Ar:ridhima tum…………….
ridhima looked at him. She could not take it anymore. "I am so sorry arman it’s because of me that ur liffe is ruined…….snif…snif
ar: But what is ur falt…..what could u do????? I m sorry ….. I wanted to help you. I couldn't just leave you there. Par us vickey ke wajah se…………Your parents took us the wrong way. I am so sorry."
Ridhima burst out crying, armaan put a hand on her shoulder. she slipped onto his lap crying. While armaan tried to console her.
Ar:sab theek ho jaye ga……….
The story suspence will be reaveled in the parts which I will be posting soon….
Waiting 4 ur comments
-ridhima
I m starting a new story named “destiny”.I had this idea in my mind for a long time now and decided to write it out. Hope you guys enjoy it and please leave your frank comments…
This Idea or concept is entirely different from any other story… Please leave your honest opinions….if u read it pls write comments whether u like it or not….pls do comment ur comments r really imp for me………
I’m not posting a character sketch since you will see the characters develop in the story itself…………
Story-line………
They entered his flat………arman walked inside…..ridhima still waiting at the door…..
Ar:andar avo………
She quitely walked in………there was complete silence…..she looked at him…..
Ri:pls…..muje sirf aaj raat yaha rehne do….mai kaal subha yaha se chali jaungi…..pls(tears fell from her eye)
Ar:(angrily)maai tumhe yaha rehne dunga…..how can u even think of it?? It is not my mistake……they forced me to marry u???meri life barbad ho gayi tumhari wajah se……….it’s like a living hell……..and how can u think I will let u live in my house??????????
She stood their crying…………..she turned around to leavve…..
Ar:kaha ja rahi ho……..meri baat abhi khatam nahi hui hai………to mai kehraha tha ki agar tum he lagta hai mai tumse yeh sab kahunga………aur tumhe ghar se nikal dunga to tum galat ho………
She looked at him in a shock……….he came forward……made her sit on the sofa……
Ar:ridhima how could u think that I will leave u all alone….it’s not ur falt…..maine tumse apni marzi se shadi ki hai…..koi zor zabardasti se nahi…..u r my wife…my responsibility……..and my destiny…..mai hamesha tumhare saath rahunga………I will be always there for u……..
She stayed quiet for a while. she started crying……..
Arman got up to the kitchen….brought water……..she drank it….
Ar:ridhima tum…………….
ridhima looked at him. She could not take it anymore. "I am so sorry arman it’s because of me that ur liffe is ruined…….snif…snif
ar: But what is ur falt…..what could u do????? I m sorry ….. I wanted to help you. I couldn't just leave you there. Par us vickey ke wajah se…………Your parents took us the wrong way. I am so sorry."
Ridhima burst out crying, armaan put a hand on her shoulder. she slipped onto his lap crying. While armaan tried to console her.
Ar:sab theek ho jaye ga……….
The story suspence will be reaveled in the parts which I will be posting soon….
Waiting 4 ur comments
Comments
hey riddhima,
ReplyDeletegreat story-line
pls continue soon
with luv,
riya
Hey, would like to read more. Interesting start!
ReplyDeleteDia
Interesting start dear... looking forward to see how the story unfolds.
ReplyDeletePrasanthi
riddhima, where is the next part??
ReplyDeletehey,niha.....pls can u post this story......
ReplyDeleteHey guys I have written some thing
Pls comment
DIL MIL GAYE continues………………
JANE TU YA JANE NA…….
Part1
Dr Armaan Mallik: played by Karan Singh Grover
Dr. Ridhima Gupta...Mallik: played by Shilpa Anand/ sukruti Khandpal (any one who is on ur mind while reading)
AR-Ri ,AT-AN ar engaged,rahul nd muskan r married again(they had to in the pressure of their family)
So...here it goes:
Part1:
Outside OT
Sha:good work dr Malik
Ar: thank u sir
Sha: so have a good day!!!
Ar:same to u sir
Locker room:
R:yeh isq haye bathe bithye janat dikaye haaiye…………………..
Ar: Oye hoye!!!!!......basket aaj mood bahut acha hai………….
R: Jabhi tum he dekhti hu to mood acha ho jata hai
A:asi baat hai………………..
R: haa!!!!!
A:coffee!!!!
R:chalo……
A:after u………….
Canteen:
R:kitna hectic day than na….
A: ha!!!!
A boy enters, he is Dr aditya (Mayank of miley jab hum tum), He’s a bit shy , intelligent, nd has all that “Indian sanskar”.he was ridhima’s collage friend who was now an intern in sanjeevani, his nature is very like Ridhima’s .
Ad:hi guys!!!!
R:hi adi!!
Ad:hi ridzi!!!!! Hi arman!!1
A:hi!!!
R:why don’t u join us
Ad:thanks
A:(makes a face)aa gaya kabab me hadi
R looking at him
Ad:arman tum ne kuch kaha
A:na
Ad:ridzi how was ur day
R:good aur tumhara kaisa tha
Ad:good
R:muje to bhahot bhook lagi hai,
Before ar could speak
Ad:tumhare liye hot choclate lata hu!!!!!!ar tumare liye kuch
Ar:no thanks cutting in between (controlling his anger why did he always try to come near ridhima)
He leaves
R:tum us se itna rudely baat kyu karte ho
A:tum mujse keh rahi ho jase tum janti nahi
R:who mera acha dost hai,tume jalan kyu ho rahi hai
A:muje jalan nahi ho rahi hai
R:to fir
A:mai jar aha hu tum apne “dost”ke sath hot choclate enjoy karo
R:arma…..
He leaves….
Later changing room
Ar was changing with his back at the door ,some one was watching him ……, suddenly some one hugged him from back
R:naraaz ho!!!!
A:ji nahi dr ridhima ....app galat soch rahe hain mai kaun hota hu tumse gussa hone wala ab aap mujhe jaane denge....!!!!
Ri grabs his hand as he was abt to leave......
ar: ridhima mera haath chodo.....muje jane do
ri:aur naa jaane dun to.....
ar: mujhe chodo naa koi dekh lega.....
ri:nai...aur wais ye to meri line hai na
ar:ri yeh kya bachpana hai.....?????
rid:mere sheru....n she kisses him on his cheeks.....
arm:ae basket yeh kya kar rahi ho....kissi ne dekh liya to....
rid:dekhne do....
arm:acchaa....to yeh baat hai.....and he turns her around in a twist and brings her more closer to him.....then armaan encloses her in his arms.....
the song starts playing....
ishq leta hai kaise imtehaan.....
ishq mein jeeun....
ishq mein marun ...
ishq hi mera bhagwaan...........................
ar:I LOVE U BASKET!!!!!
Ri:I LOVE U TOO!!!
Ri was now blushing…….ar muje chodo
Ar:are tum ne muje pehle pakda aur ab
R:aur ab mai he ………..
Ar tightens his grip over ridhimma....her lips comes too close to his.....!!!!
Ar moves his forward nd kisses her n she responds back passionately
They r kissing when suddenly
A some one comes in she is wearing a short skirt and a halter top……………………….
Pre:who is that girl……………..
-ridhima
PART2
Jane tu ya jane na
Ar-ri were kissing when suddenly
A some one comes in she is wearing a short skirt and a halter top……………………….
Voice: uhh….umm…sorry….uhh......mujhe pta nai tha ki tum log yahan par…
Armaan looked up to see who it was n Ridhima moved away from Armaan….….she is Dr nikita(shweta gulati),their fellow intern
Ni:sorry, I did not know that u were…..
Ar:it’s ok
Ar-ri were blushing
Ri-Ar walks out………
Outside
Ri is reading a file & ar is staring her
Ri:kya!!!!
Ar:winks
rid:armaan....stop it....n she smiles....
ar:oye hoye!!!!
Ri:waise aaj tum free ho??
Ar:tumhare liye to mai hamesha free hu!
Ri:aarman…..
Ri:mai soch rahi thi ki kya tum mere saath shopping aaoge
Ar:shopping…….
Just then
Muskan and rahul enters fighting
Abey muskaan ki bachi..kya bak rahi hai..
Muskaan: Oye khothe chup kar……
Ar:guys stop it yaar….
Mu:is rahul ke bache ko bol…
Ra:muje…
An:(entering)cut it guys
At:ha yaar tum log thak nahi jate jagadte
Ni:(coming out of changing room) hi guys!!!
All:hi
Ra:so tum log aaj sam ko kya kar rahe ho kal off hai to kahi bahar jaye what say??
At:ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai,kyu arman
Are: actually (looking at ridhima) mai aur basket aaj shopping karne jarahe hai
An:shopping….mai aur atul bhi a rahe hai
Ni:mai bhi
Mu:mai aur rahul bhi, waise bhi shadi ko 1 mahina bhi nahi bacha hai aur…….
Ra:shadi humari nahi hai….
Mu:pata hai…..
Ri:stop it guys!!
Ar:so it’s decided we all r going
Adi(entering)kaha jane ka plan ban raha hai????
Ri:shopping…..
Ar:hamari shadi ki….
Ra:tum a rahe ho na???
Adi:if all r going then ok
Ar makes a face
Autul’s face expressions change,arman notices this
At:excusse me guys!!!mai ata hu!!walks out
Ar:(to ri) mai abhi aya
Outside
Ar:champ kya problem hai!!!!
At:who kuch nahi…….
Ar:jooth mat bol bol kya problem hai
At:arman tu to janta hai na ki maine abhi ek naya ghar liya
Ar:to…
At:to….woh aise me shopping…..
Ar:are to tu is liye pareshan hai!!
At:ha…
Ar:kya ha tu muje bol nahi sakta…anyways tu mera bhai hai aur mere hote hua tuje chinta karne ki kya jarurat hai……
At:par…
Ar:par war kuch nahi….aur maine to (looking side ways) slowly..$#&*!@#$$^&&%*
At:tu mera sacha bhai ha
They hug each other…….chal andar
At:so sab duty ke bad milte hai……….
Arman ridhima
Ridhima is walking in the corridor singing”u r my mind blowing mahiya……..”
Suddenly…..some one dragged her to the fire escape
R: aah!!
arm:basket..........shh....quite...mai hu....
Armaan….tum bhi na...darra diya mujhe..
A: hmm…dar gayi!!! he closed is eyes…as he gently wrapped her around his arms….Ridhima smiled as he came close to her
rid:armaan kya hai...
arm:kuch nahi....
rid:to main jaa rahi hun ok...!!!!!
arm:aap kahan chali dr ridhimma.....itni aasani se thode naa chali jayengi....
rid:kya matlab....
armaan holds her tight towards the wall......he goes near and near to her and he kisses on her forehead den cheeks ....then he kisse her on her lips..... They both kiss each other passionately and are lost…
Armaan smiled....n looked at her, her eyes get filled with tears….She was so happy to have Armaan in her life...n though she didnt say it...her eyes said that to Armaan...
Ar:tum ro kyun rahi ho....marese koi bhool.......
rid:armaan tum mujhe hamesha aise hi pyar karoge naa.....?????
Ar nodded
Ridhima slowly kissed his chest....n then moved towards his neck….when Armaan gently kissed her hair...he is moving down to her neck...as Ridhima closes her eyes...the feeling of his warm breath on her neck….sent shiverrs down her spin...her hand took a tight hold at his hand...As Armaan kissed her ear...... Ridhima put her arms around his back...n Armaan’s grip on her got tighter....He again kissed her neck…n then her cheek..n again went to the other side of her neck..n was abt to go to her shoulder...wen suddenly Ridhima relaise what they were doing,and where they were...n let go off him..she blushed...n proceeded towards the door...
Ar:I love u basket!!!!!
Precap:ar-moments coming up!!!!!
-ridhima
PART 3
Precap:All decide to go for shopping……ar-ri share some passionate moments
Aditya & Nikita
Locker room:
[nik & adi liked each other a lot but they used to fight on small things (like ar-ri) but still they had feelings for each other but their ego did not let them confess]
ni was sitting on the bench
Ni:”na na na na………………”
Adi was studing an important case file.
Adi:yaha koi shanti se kam bhi nahi karsakta
Ni:”kabhi khud pe hasa………..”
Adi:mai tum se baat kar raha hu!!!!!
Ni:”na na na………..
Adi standing up and faces nikita, she was hearing a songs on her ipod and did not hear what adi said.
Ni:tum ne kuch kaha?????
Adi:ha kaha ke apna besura mu bandh rakho muje kam karma hai
Ni:tum ne muje besura kaha ……
Adi:ha kaha to…
Ni:how dare u!! saying she raised her hand to hit him,but he catches her hand and she looses her balance but adi held her by her waist
Both r lost in each others eyes
Song starts playing
“is this love……….
Adi:(moving towards her lips)
Nik: (she closes her eyes)
Nik leans forward & adi also come forward and were so close they felt each others breath they kissed each other passionately
They heard giggling sound, they broke apart and were socked to see all “ig”(intern gang) standing there with a surprised look on their face!!!!!!
Adi & nik were so embarrassed
Nik:who muje…….duty pe jana hai (she leaves)
Adi:muje bhi…….
At:yeh log to chupe rustam nikle
Mu:ha yaar muje to smajme nahi a raha ke ye dono……
Ra:arman tu itna kyu muskura raha hai
Ar:tuje kya pata aaj muje kitni khushi ho rahi hai……looks at ridhima smiling
An:aise konsi baat hai……
Ri:who kuch nahi di………..
An:whatever…………….
Ar:so guys yaad hai na ki hame shopping pe jana hai
Mu:ha who hum kaise bhool sakte hai!!!!!
Ar:to thik hai mai tum logo ko pick up karlunga
Ra,mu an,ri:cool
At:are adi aur niks ko bhi
Ra:muje nahi lagta ki who log hamare saath aenge…..especially abhi jo hua uske baad..
All:ha yaar
An:to mai unhe inform kar deti hu ke who log hame mall ke bahar mile
Ok
Ra:to chale
An:ha ridzi chal
Ar:signals her not to go with anji
Ri:di aap jao muje thoda kaam hai mai aa jaungi
Ar smiles
An:ok par jaldi karma……..
Ri:ji
All leave ar-ri standing there
Ri:kya hai kyu muje di ke saath jane nahi diya????
Ar:kyuki……moves forward
Ri:stepping back ward………….kyu
Ar:batadu………………
Precap:a girl wearing Capri and red halter walked out of gupta house……..she was looking so gorgeous …………………..
How was it guys!!!!!
Pls comment.........
PLS PLS COMMENT………………………..
-ridhima.